Friday, 29 January 2010

Script;

Enter Lewis, street corner, stumbling along.
Lewis (to himself): nearly home. nearly home.

we see Lewis at the front of his house, close up of key going into lock.
Lewis opens door, drops coat.
Pan to the living room door, enter Liam.
Liam (angry): where have you been?
Lewis (slurred): just at the pub.
Liam pushes Lewis against the wall.
Shot to Liam's mouth during the next speech;
Liam; what are you playing at? why do you always get pissed you twat. you shouldn't drink so much, we've got a lecture tomorrow morning.
Lewis (slurry); Oh dear. *laughs*
Liam: I GIVE UP.
Shot of Liam walking away.
Lewis; why aren't you going to hit me? you're too pussy to hit me, aren't you?
There is no reaction from Liam.
Lewis; LIAM, you should have hit me! but no, you're too scared to. *laughs*
Liam turns round, walks smartly up to Lewis and punches him in the face.
Liam: HAPPY NOW?
Shot of Lewis falling to the floor
Shot (outside)
Liam walks out the front door.
Lewis (in background) wipes his nose, it is bleeding. He looks at the blood and laughs.
Lewis (shouting after him): That's it, now you're getting it. *flumps over*
Camera follows Liam as he turns the corner.
STOP.

Thursday, 28 January 2010

ideas;

uni student, flat share.

2 characters, ADHD (Lewis), other is fed up with his behaviour (Liam), argument ensues.

script; stilted, Lewis is distracted, everything other than the conversation interests him.
Liam is getting more and more frustrated, bursts with anger, holds Lewis against wall, Lewis antagonizes Liam, Liam lets go, Lewis mocks Liam for not hitting him, Liam turns round, hits Lewis, Lewis falls to ground.

Sounds; diagetic, door opening, closing, opening of beer can, Liam breathing. until last scene, lewis on floor, music (broken social scene?)

Shots;
Medium shot of Lewis coming round corner, we see Lewis at his front door, followed by key going into the door.
Lewis coming in, cantered angle, slurring his words.
Pan to living room door,
Over the shoulder shot, shows Liam coming out of living room, angry look.
Pushes Lewis against wall, shouts at Lewis, focus on mouth.
Lewis, focus on eyes.
Shot to Liam's face, anger.
Long pan backwards, taking in both characters.
Liam goes to leave, follow Liam with camera shot.
Shot back to Lewis, jeering, focus on eyes and mouth.
Short duration shots of Liam running towards Lewis.
Long shot of Liam punching Lewis, Lewis falling to floor, camera follows him.
Disjointed shot of Liam walking away.